Any comments on another poem?

She wants to be with the addiction of drugs to make her feel as if she has nothing to loose accept you so a he is hold on but what she can't take won't fade but if you tell her your feelings that you have will let her understand that you feel the pain too. This is like a love of a lost soul to me because you loving person for not only for who she is but what you can do for her and I think that was a good poem it speaks how you feel and everything. This poetry makes it sound so real and if it is I want to say her love for you is no more than what you do for her and so she should love you for what you do.